This is what I'm working on now (while I wait to hear the fate of my Civil War novel) -- a loosely connected series of short stories set in my neighborhood or someplace similar.
Here's the opening of The Carrion Crow:
THE CARRION CROW
Frances packs up her little overnight
bag and takes three containers of her special chicken vegetable soup out of the
freezer. She is making ready to go stay with Miz Petunia Shelton who is
lingering on death’s doorstep past all reason. After two weeks of waiting by
their mama’s bedside to be with her at the end, old Miz Shelton’s children have
given up. They need to get back to their jobs and their own lives in Charlotte
and Atlanta and Knoxville. They all
still work, though they are up in their sixties, and since their mama won’t
die, they have called in Frances who used to be an aide in a nursing home and
isn’t afraid to change a diaper or clean up a mess.
She looks around
her little apartment for the Word Search book she is working on and for her bag
of romance novels from the library. A job like this involves a lot of sitting
and she wants to be sure to have some entertainment on hand. TV might bother
the patient though Frances has been in houses where the TV runs night and day,
a winking blue light and a low background noise that some folks get uneasy
without. You never know just what you’ll find.
This ain’t her first rodeo, sitting with the
dying when their family couldn’t or wouldn’t do the job. There are some who
call her the Angel of Death for her calm and gentle way with the dying one.
There are others, and she could name names but won’t, who call her the Carrion
Crow or maybe the Carrying Crow and say she does this job in hopes of carrying
off bits and pieces that the dying person or their family might give her.
It’s true that folks
have given her things. The dying, when they’re still in their right minds, are
often eager to be shed of worldly possessions; maybe thinking on the Bible
verses about the rich man and the camel and the eye of the needle, they want to lighten themselves to ease the
trip to the other side. Or maybe they just like to believe someone will
remember them kindly when they look at the plate with the Praying Hands, or the
little microwave that’s been in the box since the grandchildren sent it last
Christmas, or the mouse-stained quilt top that’s lain at the back of the closet
shelf for thirty years. Frances always accepts whatever it is in the spirit in
which it’s given and finds a place in her life for these precious gifts, trying
to remember to say a little prayer for the giver every day.
Sometime she sits
in her recliner (a gift from Juanita Sprinkle’s daughter after Juanita passed)
and goes around the room, looking at all the mementos and naming and praying
for each of the ladies she’s stayed with – and she only stays with ladies any
more, after the bad time she had with old man Ray. Who would have thought a feeble
old fool on his death bed could have had such nasty thoughts or been so bad to
grab?
The Word Search is
in the pocket of the recliner. She pulls it out, along with her red ballpoint
pen, and drops it in the bag with the library books. Her only houseplant – a jade
plant that the late Dessie Randall gave her -- has had its little drink and
will do fine even if she’s gone a week or more.
Frances climbs
into her cute little blue Ford Escort – the one that started the whole Carrying
Crow business when Patsy Ramsey left it to her in her will – starts it up and
pats the steering wheel. “Thank you, Miss Patsy,” she says. “I hope you’re
resting easy up there.”
9 comments:
Now that's an interesting start to a story! Looking forward to reading more . . .
Oh what a fun sounding book! Well, fun while serious, I mean. Looking forward to how you like the ending.
I'm ready for more!
I already know that you will line up your perfectly shaped stories like a row of pearls!
I always want to read more....
I love it! Amazing how well I know Frances from this little teaser. Hope to hear more about her.
Do I dare say? -- "Hurry! Can't wait to read all the stories!"
That title!
This Frances enjoyed your story very much. I could envision that I was in that room with your Frances. xo
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