I figured him for a preacher man, ‘long of that dark suit and the Bible tucked under his left arm. He come walking down our road, where from, I couldn’t say. Nothing up that way but fields and woods and the old graveyard. I reckon he could of been visiting kin that’s buried up there – folks do come from away and make the climb, just to brush the gravestones clean or say a prayer for one that’s gone. But it seemed right queer didn’t none of us see him pass by on his way up the road nor even hear a dog bark. Course, we was at church the most of the morning but Inez had stayed home, saying she felt puny. And puny-feeling or not, Inez pays mind to what goes by on the road.
I’d
been taking my Sunday ease, setting on the bank beside the house where the dirt
road runs through our land. That new black and tan hound I’d just traded for,
the one the girls had named Drum, was out there too, laying next to me. After
last night’s hunt, I reckon the warm sun felt good to both of us. Ol’ Drum was
stretched out on his side, sleeping deep, but twitching his legs like he
thought he was still a-hunting. Down in his throat he made little yipping
sounds and I wondered what it was he was chasing through his dreams.
Leaning
back against the old tree stump we use for busting stove wood, I sucked down
big breaths of that dry fall air, so crisp and clean it put me in mind of
biting into a good apple. Back in the house I could hear the rattle of knives
and forks in the dishpan and Inez and Odessa singing close harmony on “Anchored
in Love Divine” – them two get on right good when
they’re singing. I could hear a sight of them old carpenter bees buzzing round
the house eaves and I could feel my eyelids getting heavier by the minute.
I
knowed that Mama’d be taking her rest – the only time in the week she’ll let
them hands be still and consent to set and rock without picking up her mending.
Time was, we took our Sunday rest together; time was . . . and my eyes begun to
close and my mind to drift away to those far off Sunday afternoons. . .
“Howdy,
there,”
The
words was spoke ‘most in my ear and I jerked awake. The stranger had slipped
right up on me, catching me gape-mouthed and nodding, his fancy shoes stepping
soft in the dust of the road. I blinked up at him, bumfuzzled with sleep and
memory and Sunday dinner.He stood there in his dark old-fashioned suit, rocking back and forth on them fancy shoes, still shiny ‘neath the dust from the road. The sun hit on his little round glasses, dazzling my eyes. Hit kindly put me in an ill temper, the way he’d come up on me unawares and the way he was looking down at me. Makes a man uneasy for a feller to have the advantage of him that way.
I got to my feet, taking my time and not yet giving him back a howdy of my own. It riled me some to see Drum laying there, still a-sleeping and chasing dreams while this stranger had crept up on us like that, making us both look the fool. So I reached out my foot in its Sunday brogan and caught that dog a good un, right on his hindquarter.
Ol’
Drum yelped and jumped up, whirling around to see what had got after him and his
eyes lit upon the stranger. His back hair raised up and he lifted his lip in
the beginning of a snarl.
That
aggravated me even more. “Think you’re a watchdog, do you, you worthless pup? Look
at you, all stiff-legged and agitatin’ when it’s too late. Lay down, you hear
me? Lay down!”
The
stranger didn’t appear overly worried as to whether Drum might offer to bite
but hunkered down right before him and held out his open hand for the dog to
smell of. Ol’ Drum sniffed at the long
white fingers and his fur settled back smooth. Then he lay down with his head
on his paws, not taking his eyes from the stranger.
“Hunter’s
the name,” said the stranger, straightening up and putting out his hand.to me.
“Nim Hunter -- hunter by nature and Hunter by name – my folks put the name of
Nimrod on me and don’t the Book tell us that Nimrod was a mighty hunter before
the Lord?”
I
took the outstretched hand – soft and white like it hadn’t never done no hard
work and with fingernails longer than I’d ever seen on a man. “P. V.
Henderson,” I said. “Pleased to meet you.”
I
looked up the road, the way he’d come from, waiting for him to make mention of
what his business was out our way, but he just rocked back on his heels again and
looked down at Drum.“This the hound I heard last night, baying up one holler and down another?”
He
didn’t wait for me to answer, but went on. “He’s got a pretty voice on him. The
sound woke me and I just lay there thinking as how I’d like to have me a dog
like that again. Yessir, I used to be a fool for hunting dogs. Sweetest music
there is, a good hound with that deep bay like a church bell. I tell you what,
friend, after hearing this dog of yourn, I believe I’d like to buy him off of
you.”
Well,
it puzzled me some to know what to say. On the one hand, it didn’t set right
somehow, this feller just walking down the road and wanting to buy my dog. On
the other, I couldn’t help but wonder what kind of an offer he might make. I
cleared my throat and spat, using the time to consider. I was about to ask
where it was he’d stayed last night that he had heard the sound of the dogs but
it went right out of my head when he pulled a gold piece from his pocket and
held it up to catch the sunlight.
“Twenty
dollar gold piece,” says he. “But I’ll trade it for that dog there -- same one
you just kicked and called a worthless pup.”
Well,
buddy, I’ll not deny I was tempted. Sore tempted. I’d turned in what few gold
coins I had back in ’33 when the government said we must but I fairly ached to
hold that double eagle, to feel the soft warm weight of it in my pocket, to rub
it betwixt my fingers and thumb. Ever since I was a man, I’d carried a gold
piece in my pocket for luck but I’d turned my double eagle in with the rest,
wanting to stay on the right side of the law. After that, I couldn’t stop
myself reaching for it, over and over. Finally I took to carrying a buckeye in
that pocket but it weren’t the same.
Still
and all, something in that stranger’s looks and way of speaking put my back up.
It ain’t right, just to try and buy a man’s dog offen him without even asking
was that dog for sale.
The
stranger flicked the gold piece with his thumb and sent it spinning into the
sunlit air, curving in a slow, glittering path towards me. The light caught the
coin, making it look like a whole waterfall of little suns coming right at me
and before I knew what I was about, I held out my open hand.
The
coin settled there like a bird in its nest, warm and heavy and bright as if it
had been new-minted. I felt my fingers wanting to close on it and carry it to
my pocket. A yearning was growing in me and it was all I could do to keep my
hand steady and my fingers straight.
The stranger watched me, reading the hunger in
my eyes. “Feels right fine, don’t it? We got us a bargain? You can find you
another dog easy enough. I reckon I could buy several with that double
eagle, was I to keep on down the road. But I’ve taken a notion to have this one
for I like the sound of his voice. And I need to get on home.”
Then he leaned over and took ahold of Drum’s collar. I’d made it only the
evening before – fresh-tanned leather with a stout brass buckle and my name,
P.V. Henderson, burnt into the leather with the edge of the poker. Seeing that
stranger grab hold of the collar and cover up my name with them long, pale
fingers purely aggravated me and I spoke right up.
“Now,
just you hold on a minute,” I said, feeling the gold piece burning my open
hand. “I ain’t agreed to nothing and there ain’t no bargain.” I stretched out
my hand to him. “Go on, now, take back that double eagle. You ever stop to
think maybe this dog ain’t for sale?”
The
stranger cut his eyes at me and then over to the house where Odessa had come
out to set on the porch with her little guitar. She looked just like a rose in
her pretty pink Sunday dress. A slow smile spread acrost the stranger’s face.
“Everything’s for sale, friend,” he said quiet-like. “We just ain’t reached the
bargain yet.”
Something
in the way he looked at my little girl like to froze the blood in my body. I
didn’t say nothing just turned my hand over and let the bright coin slide off
my hand to fall in the dust of the road.
The
stranger didn’t reach for it, just stood there watching Odessa pick that
guitar. And when she begun to sing “I’ll Fly Away,” in that sweet high voice of
hers, the smile on his face broadened till I could see clear to his back teeth.
I
took a piece of twine from out my overhauls pocket and put it through ol’
Drum’s collar. It was in my mind to get him out of the stranger’s sight and I
didn’t trust that fool dog to follow me.
“I
got things to do,” says I. “You best pick up your double eagle and get on home,
like you said you needed to.”
“Evenin’,
P.V.,” says he, nodding his head. “Be sure to give my regards to your pretty
daughter.”
Oncet
again, his words sent a chill over me. Yonder on the porch, Odessa had set her
guitar down and was looking hard at the stranger and smiling. I didn’t give him
a good evening nor nare word more,
just hollered to Odessa to go inside and see didn’t her mama need her. Then I
hauled ‘ol Drum round the house and put him on the chain at his dog box.
By
the time I come back to the roadside, the stranger had gone and his gold piece
with him. Good riddance, I thought and aimed a long stream of baccer juice at
the spot where the stranger had stood.
***
“Who was that pretty
feller you was talking to?” Odessa set the cornbread and buttermilk on the
supper table in front of me. “I told Inez he looked like a preacher.”
Mama
mashed up her cornbread in a bowl and covered it with buttermilk. “Hit would be
nice,” she said, “to have someone new to bring the Word. Brother Quarles is bad
to give the same message, over and over.”
Inez
was scowling, likely jealous that she
hadn’t seen the stranger, and then she come out with something hateful about
folks with time to set on the porch whilst other is slaving in the kitchen.
Odessa,
who always was as sweet-natured as they come, tapped Inez on her wrist and said
in that wheedling way she has, “Now, Sissy, tell the truth and shame the devil.
After we done up the dishes, you know you went and lay down – you said you had
a sick headache.”
Then
Odessa turned her eyes on me – eyes like her mama’s, blue as chicory flowers --
and commenced to quiz me – was the man a preacher, where was he from and where
did he live and was he coming back? And what was the name of that pretty man?
All
three women was watching close as I filled my bowl with applesauce. They just
kept staring, like cats watching a mouse hole and at last I laid my spoon down.
“He
didn’t act like no preacher,” I told
them. “And all I know is he come down the road from the graveyard. I ain’t got
no idea where he lives but I hope Mr. Nimrod Hunter ain’t coming back.”
***
It
was deep in the night when I was wakened by the sound of a dog on the chase. I
lay there under the quilts, thinking as how the baying sounded a lot like ol’
Drum. And the longer I lay there, the more I begun to believe that it was Drum and that either he had slipped
his collar or that the stranger man had come back and stole my dog.
I
got up quiet like – the moon was near full, its light spilling in the window.
The bed springs creaked as Mama turned over but she just didn’t say nothing and
directly she was snoring again.
Outside
the moonlight lit up the yard, turning the logs of the pigpen and the roof of
Drum’s dog box a sheeny silver, like a new dime. The silver lay on the links of
Drum’s chain too and it was pulled out to its full length to under a big old
balsam where Bone, my last dog, had dug him a kind of nest. In the dark I
couldn’t see for sure but I thought I made out the shape of a dog curled up
back in there. It was right airish out and I only had on a pair of drawers so I
turned to head back to my warm bed.
As
I set foot on the back steps, the baying up on the mountain commenced again,
sounding so much like Drum that I knew I’d not sleep a lick till I made certain
sure that Drum was on his chain.
So, cussing myself for all kinds of a fool, I went back, picked up the dog
chain, and give a sharp tug.
And
it rattled over the hard-packed dirt to me, snapping back like a whip. At the
end, the shackle I used to hold to the dog collar was just a-dangling free.
There weren’t no collar nor no dog neither.
All
the long night, I lay awake, harking to the full throated sound of a hound on
the mountain, chasing the trail of some critter through the moony night.
***
Come
morning and I had a closer look at the chain. I couldn’t say for sure if maybe
I hadn’t closed the shackle tight or if someone, that someone being Mr. Nim
Hunter, had loosed it. Inez was busy at her sewing machine and Mama and Odessa
was doing the milking. Oncet I had fed the stock, I couldn’t rest till I had
gone up the road to see could I find my dog. Howsomever he had come to be
loose, after a night running the mountain, it could be he was curled up asleep
somewhere yonder.
I
studied the road as I went but there had come a little shower just before first
light and there weren’t no tracks to speak of. At the least there should have
been the footprints of the stranger coming down and finally, at a spot where a
big elm leaned over the road, I did make out his trace.
But
only going down – and then near the edge of the road I thought I might have
seen paw prints. I whistled and called, like I’d been doing all along, but it
weren’t no good.
The
road ends atop a hogback ridge at the old graveyard. There was still a wire
fence around it but in several places, the postes had rotted and the fence was
laying on the ground. Ever since the Worleys donated that piece of land down
near the church, the old graveyard ain’t used. On Decoration Day there’s those
of us makes the climb with swing blades and scythes to keep the woods from
taking back the ridge top and sometimes the preacher comes and we have a word
of prayer but for all that, it’s an awful sad and lonesome place. My mama’s
mama, who died before I was born, lays up here but my other kin are down in the
churchyard.
I
called again for Drum and listened hard, thinking maybe to hear him stirring
about in the fallen leaves but there was no sound save the sigh of the wind
through the pines and the hammering of one of them great old woodpeckers. So I
begun to walk the line, following the fence, and thinking that, long as I’s up
here, I might as well see could I prop up the fallen places.
At
the far side of the graveyard, where the oldest headstones are, I called again.
A squirrel barked from a tree and in the distance I heard the clank of a
cowbell. But no Drum. I begun to wonder if the worthless pup might have spent
the night carousing through the woods and
then taken off for his old home over t’other side of the Walnut Mountain.
I
pulled the last section of hog wire out of the long brown grass and
straightened the fallen post, putting it back in its hole with a few rocks to
fix it there. Needing one more rock to finish the job, I begun to search around.
Afore
long, I spotted a nice chunk of orange-colored rock next to a mossy old
headstone setting off to itself. As I made my way toward it, I seen something
winking at me from the top of the headstone – a piece of mica or pretty rock, I
thought – some folks leaves tokens like that when they visit their kin.
But
as I got closer I saw that it weren’t no shiny rock but a twenty dollar gold
piece twinkling in that green moss. And there was Drum’s collar, curled up at
the footstone of that old grave.
***
There’s folks would say
it’s wrong to take from a grave. And that had been my first thought, that maybe
the stranger had left the coin as a token for whoever it was that lay there.
But as I looked from the coin to the empty dog collar and back again, it seemed
to me that if Nim Hunter had took my dog, I might as well have his money. The
double eagle was in my hand and in my pocket before I could pause for another
thought. I took back the collar too.
I went home and told them either Drum had run off or that stranger had stole him and told them all to keep an eye out for either of them. Inez and Mama nodded but Odessa said she just knowed that a man as pretty as that stranger couldn’t be no dog thief. That girl is a fool for a good-looking man.
I went home and told them either Drum had run off or that stranger had stole him and told them all to keep an eye out for either of them. Inez and Mama nodded but Odessa said she just knowed that a man as pretty as that stranger couldn’t be no dog thief. That girl is a fool for a good-looking man.
***
That evening I walked over to Cantrelleses place and asked them to let me know did they see my dog and when I fell asleep that night I was satisfied that I'd done all I could. It still rankled though and it was some time afore I could fall asleep. When I did, my dreams was uneasy and full of hounds baying and gold pieces spinning and sun glinting off little round spectacles. I was way deep down when Mama jabbed me with her elbow and whispered, "Listen there, P.V.-- don't that sound awful like ol' Drum?"
***
I set out in the
moonlight, following the sound of the baying and hoping to find Drum afore he
denned up somewhere. It always seemed that he was just ahead of me and I kept
climbing, thinking every minute to lay hands on him. But he was always just
beyond my grasp.
At first light the baying stopped. I was
red-eyed and weary but once again I was at the graveyard and like the day
before, I walked all around, calling for Drum.
When he didn’t come, I gave it up. But I wanted to know whose grave it was Nim Hunter had left a twenty dollar gold piece on and I made my way to the mossy headstone that loomed over the sunken-in plot where I’d found Drum’s collar.
When he didn’t come, I gave it up. But I wanted to know whose grave it was Nim Hunter had left a twenty dollar gold piece on and I made my way to the mossy headstone that loomed over the sunken-in plot where I’d found Drum’s collar.
Squatting
down, I tried to make out the words but the moss was too thick so I pulled out
my Barlow knife and begun to scrape away the thick green covering. I commenced
at the bottom and there was the outline of some animal -- might have been a
running deer, might have been a dog.
The dates showed next -- so worn that they was
hard to see. I ran my fingers over them till I could feel their shape – 1837
and 1872.“Long gone, whoever you are,” I said aloud as I worked to uncover the place where the name should be. “I reckon I have more use for a double eagle then you do these days.”
As the last sheet of moss fell away, I saw that the name was carved deep and big and there weren’t no mistaking how it read: NIMROD HUNTER.
I jumped right up, catching my foot where the ground sunk in and throwing out my left hand to get ahold of the gravestone to steady myself.
And there beneath my palm, I could feel the smooth warmth
of a second gold coin.
Now,
a man is bad to tell himself what he wants to hear and in that moment I told
myself that this was likely the grave of Nim Hunter’s great great granddaddy
and that this second coin had been there yesterday and I just hadn’t seen it
for the moss. I almost believed myself too.
Be that as it may, that second coin found its way to my
other pocket and I left the graveyard feeling the two coins tapping ‘gainst my
legs as I went. And I was sure that, in the bargaining for ol’ Drum, I’d got
the best of Nim Hunter.
***
Somehow I weren’t hungry
when suppertime came, but I sat there with Mama and my girls, supping at a
glass of buttermilk and listening to Odessa tell about who all she’d seen at
the general store and what the news was in the county. It seemed the cotton
mill was closing and John Avery was talking of pulling up stakes and heading
off to Texas. Me and Mamma shook our heads at this, knowing that John was just
trying to get away from that young schoolteacher he’s been sparking. Odessa
went on to say that Violet had invited her to come for a visit and Inez poked
her lower lip out and slammed out to the kitchen to start washing dishes. We
didn’t none of us pay no mind – that’s just Inez’s way.
“…and old Miz Griffiths come in to buy lamp oil and we was talking of this and that
and I mentioned about that stranger man and asked did she know any Hunters in
these parts. She thought a minute and then said there’d been a family of that
name lived up our road many a year
ago. She said that her granny had used to talk of them, saying they’d been
strange folk who kept to themselves and when the only son, who had broke his
mama’s heart with his rambling ways, had died, they’d all moved away.”
Out
in the kitchen, Inez was banging pots and pans about till it sounded like a war
but Odessa poured herself another glass of milk and went on telling how Miz
Griffths’s granny had gone to the Hunter boy’s funeral and had always talked
about what a handsome corpse young Nimrod had made.
“And
she said that the family thought so much of him that they had laid him to rest
with gold coins on his eyes. Did you ever hear of such?”
All at once them two gold coins in my pockets
felt as cold as the grave and I made up my mind to take them up the road the
very next day and put them back where I found them. I still couldn’t make out
the whys and wherefores of the matter but I was sure of one thing and that was
that those double eagles weren’t like to bring me nothing but bad luck.
***
I slept awful bad that
night, between the moon shining in on my face and the gold coins weighing on my
mind. In my dreams I still heard ol Drum and mixed in with the baying of the
hound, I seemed to hear Odessa picking her little guitar and singing a high
sweet lonesome song.
It wasn’t till sunup when I wakened, wore out
with riding the night mare through my sleep. The good smells of biscuits and
bacon and brewing coffee were filling the house and I could hear the womenfolk
moving about in the kitchen.
I
pulled on my shirt and overhauls and, feeling some shamefaced for having
overslept myself, slipped into the kitchen and set down to the table. Inez put my mug of coffee before me, slopping some onto the table the way she always does. Her face was sourer than usual.
“Looks
like it’s all on me and Mama today . . . here you are sleeping late and Miss Odessa went and lit out for
who-knows where before I was even awake. She put on her good dress too, the
pink one I ironed yesterday, and she
took her guitar. I reckon she’s taken a mind to go visit Violet. Some people-”
I
didn’t wait to hear no more but headed out the door and up the road, those gold
pieces weighing heavier and heavier in my pockets. I clumb that road so fast I
couldn’t hardly get my breath. And all I could think as I clumb was that I had
to give them double eagles back to Nim Hunter.
***
From the gate of the
grave yard I can see Odessa’s guitar leaning against Nim Hunter’s gravestone,
just a-shining in the morning sun. And her pink dress is spread like a coverlet
over his sunken grave.
Seeing
this purely knocks what is left of my breath out of me and I feel all swimmie
headed and like to fall down. I have to bend over with my hands on my knees and
wait for the pounding in my chest and the roaring in my ears to stop. A little
breeze rattles the last leaves, sending them a-slant across the graveyard,
spinning and glittering in the sun. And the sight of them chills me through and
through while the gold coins in my pockets weigh heavy and burn against my legs.
I
can’t hardly go but I must. My boots seem to stick to the ground like as though
I was wading through deep mud toward the grave. Same as when I was following
ol’ Drum’s baying t’other night, the grave stays just out of reach. At last
though, I make my way to where the dress and the guitar are waiting for me. I pull
the two gold coins from my pockets and slam them down atop the new-scraped
headstone.
“Nim Hunter!” I holler. “There ain’t no
bargain! Give me back my girl, Hunter! Give me back my girl!”
The
words come back at me from the mountains all around… my girl . . . my girl,” and the guitar strings vibrate and hum.
I
turn in a slow circle, hoping to see something moving in the woods, all the
while knowing that I won’t. The golden leaves are fluttering thick around me
now and the mocking echoes and the hum of the guitar strings fill my ears.
Snatching up the pink dress, I catch the scent
of lye soap and of the flowery perfume Odessa wears of a Sunday. I bury my face
in the crisp cloth and breathe in my daughter’s life before I fling the dress
aside.
Then I fall to my knees, and begin to dig.
15 comments:
What a gripping story! I'm sitting up in bed with a cup of tea - and that's gone cold, so enthralled was I in this tale. You're an extraordinary story weaver, Vicki. Thanks for a great start to my day.
That made me get up and check on my dog and walk around and reorient to the here and now. That is some awesome story-telling you've got going on.
Great story, Vicki. Held my interest with every word.
That was FANTASTIC.
So glad to hear the last of it...or maybe it wasn't. The poor people in Tryon missed out on it since you had a cold. I'm reading a very interesting old book with lots of vernacular speech from the old times...The Trees by Conrad Richter. Apparently he wrote 3 books, and this is the only one available at Buncombe County digital library. It received a rather poor review, but I'm enjoying it immensely...where the "Northwest" woods were just being settled, and the Ohio River is mentioned as well as going west to Illinois. It takes place sometime after 1776 because they are celebrating the 4th of July. Have you read it?
I haven't. Sounds interesting. I's funny to remember that Illinois was once the frontier,
I'll be back...
Like Jenny, my coffee has gone cold on my night table as I read your story. You really pulled me in, I felt I was there in the kitchen, bed and on dusty roads. Wonderful story, I want more! ❤️❤️
amazing story!
Thankyou ! That's wonderful !!
This was quite a fine yarn.
WOW! I wanted this to be the opening chapter. More please!
OMG - Vicki, Just saw your story and I have goosebumps on this bright sunny day. All this makes me yearn for more of you stories!!! Is this a portion of a new novel [hint, hint] or an incredible stand alone story. Thank you so much for distracting me from the usual political drivel I read--will have something mystical to ponder all day long. So glad you are back to writing and doing well! luv, judy
This is a short story. And that's all there is. I'm working on a collection of short stories -- all from my neck of the woods, some present day, some past.
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