As I worked on this, I realized there must be a story to go with it. Here's a beginning--both story and picture need some work--but I have more pictures and more story in mind. (A brachet is a small, noisy hunting dog.)
ESMERALDA AND THE BROWN BRACHET
Clearly, the brachet had been a mistake. But when, on the third
lonely day of her quest, the little hound had popped out from behind the
Standing Stones of Glarn, Esmeralda had greeted it with joy.
“Hail, O brachet! Art sent to accompany me, mayhap as guide
and guard?”
The skinny brachet had fixed her with a penetrating gaze which
dropped at once to the leathern pouch at her side.
“Art hungered, little one?” Esmeralda knelt down before the
brachet and reached into the pouch. “Gladly will I share of my simple
provisions.”
Two wheaten rolls and a twist of dried venison disappeared,
and the brachet moved closer to nose at the pouch. Esmeralda reached out a hand
to stroke the dog—no, this was a bitch, to be sure. “What a pretty maid thou
art, with thy white stockings and elegant long ears.
The brachet had accepted the
caress with a philosophical sigh. There will be more food, she reasoned;
in time the fragrant bulging pouch will be at my mercy. The woman is desperate
for companionship. Look at her crouched there, cloak spread on the
ground, face imploring. If she had a tail, she'd be wagging it.
The brachet had allowed herself a
tiny whine and, swallowing her pride with the last morsel of bread, had licked
the young woman’s hand. There, done and done.
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“Come out of it, you wretched
brachet! Leave it, I say.”
Esmeralda’s feet hurt. Five days
of walking, three of them through this strange wood, five days of listening to
the brachet howl, five days of watching the sinuous brown body dart off into
inaccessible places. Five days of watching the crystal at the top of her staff
fail to respond to the rising moon as it should have done.
“When the crystal is set alight
by Luna’s beams, then must thou follow the path she shows,” the aged Sooth-Seer
had whispered. “Follow it even as an arrow from a bow if thou wouldst find the
dungeon where the true prince lies.”
Esmeralda drew in a deep breath
and limped ahead. Just a few more paces and she would be clear of these dark
trees. She could just glimpse a clearing ahead and sense, rather than see, a burgeoning
glow.
The brachet continued her
frenzied excavation at the base of a grandfather tree as Esmeralda stepped into
the moonlit glade and held aloft her crystal-topped staff.
5 comments:
I love this. Please keep it going.
Way to go Vicki!! You are now a writer/illustrator! What fun to put your two talents together! Waiting for more...
Yes, Keep it going.
Love this Vicki. The brachet is just like our Jenny. She is a working cocker spaniel and would fit perfectly into your story :) Please keep writing the story.
Star
That is a lovely beginning! I, now, too await breathlessly your next installment!
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