I can't resist sharing with you all a bit from that unpublished first book. Elizabeth is on vacation at the coast and has discovered a body on the beach. This is a bit with Aunt Dodie -- you all may remember her from UNDER THE SKIN and her phone message at the end of IN A DARK SEASON.
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No sooner had Elizabeth put down the phone
than it rang again. “Elizabeth, dear,” quavered the voice at the other end. “This
is Aunt Dodie.”
With an amused smile and
a resigned glance toward the waiting journal, Elizabeth leaned back, prepared
to listen. Aunt Dodie Russell was not actually her aunt, but had been a good
friend of her mother, and now, years after Elizabeth’s mother’s death, Aunt
Dodie still kept in touch, phoning or sending cards several times a year. She
lived, as it happened, in New Bern and Elizabeth had been planning to pay a
formal visit during the course of the next week. Aunt Dodie had visited
Elizabeth and Sam on the farm years ago, and had admired everything politely
while confiding, “You know, it’s all so charming but I would miss the
concrete.”
Though unwilling to travel now, Aunt
Dodie still lived in the house she and her husband had bought as newlyweds. They
had had no children, one of the reasons for her continuing interest in
Elizabeth. Now, since the death of “the old gentleman,” as Aunt Dodie always
referred to her late husband, she lived quite alone with the occasional help of
Keith and Raul, her next door neighbors, who ran an interior decorating
business and antique shop. The “boys,” as she called them, had adopted Aunt
Dodie for their own, referring to her as “a perfect period piece” and helping
out in countless ways.
“Aunt Dodie!” Elizabeth said
cheerfully, for she was very fond of the scatter-brained little octogenarian,
“I was going to call-”
“Well, dear, I called your home and that nice
nephew of yours, so polite, it’s
quite a pleasure to speak with him, well he told me that you were in Beaufort
and gave me your phone number and I said, then she is the one in the newspaper, my dear, how awful for you and what a
coincidence but when I read the story, the newspaper was a few days old because
the paperboy, well she’s a girl
actually, so nice that girls do so many things nowadays, but she’d thrown it
onto the roof. Raul wanted to go up after it but I said absolutely not with your bad back and I know Keith
has a thing about heights from that time their cat was up the tree so I finally caught the girl this morning and
made her get it down for me; the roof isn’t high and there’s such a stout
lattice by the front door almost a ladder really so she was in no danger whatsoever but we ought to pay
for the consequences of our carelessness, don't you think so, my dear?”
Aunt
Dodie’s in good form, thought Elizabeth, wondering briefly how Ben had
dealt with her ramblings.
“And the odd
thing, well the really odd thing is
that I know the Harper family, though
when I say family, it’s really Genevieve the mother that I know, she was in my garden club till she moved away
but she had the most beautiful and really unusual caladiums, those beautiful
pinks and greens and whites do so
well with azaleas and she was always generous about dividing them. She gave me
quite a few and they’ve absolutely flourished
so when I saw in the newspaper that an Elizabeth Goodweather had discovered
poor Charlotte’s body and I remembered how you and Sam used to spend time down
around Beaufort, I said to myself, it must be my little Elizabeth and then I-”
“Aunt Dodie,” Elizabeth broke in, “will you
be at home tomorrow? I’d like to come
see you.”
“Well, of course, dear, that is just what I was going to propose. I’ll
go to early church and then we can have lunch here at my house on the veranda. These
days are so lovely for being outside, not too hot or too chilly and the veranda
is screened so we don’t have to worry
about bugs though they’re not so bad at this time of year. You do remember how
to get here, don’t you? You and poor Sam
visited me just the year before he- Such a sweet man and you go on so bravely, your mother would have been proud
. . .”
11 comments:
Love that last line!
Love it!
You have such a gift for really vivid characters - their voices are so clear in my head!
I grew up with quite a few Aunt Dodies -- my grandmother's bridge club comes to mind.
Aunt Dodie rings very true, Vicki. You have taken me down some memory lanes with your relating of that phone conversation. Mentioning Beaufort and New Bern rang bells. Thank you very much for sharing the excerpt with us,. I wouldn't mind another helping sometime, if it would be convenient.
xo
I think I am ready to read the whole thing ;-)
This is too good to keep to yourself, Vicki. It's begging to be read by a wider audience.
I too had my "Aunt Dodies". Would absolutely love to read the entire book! :-)
I wouldn't mind turning into Aunt Dodie, actually. I'd love to make the paper carrier pay for her sins, though I was a papergirl myself a gazillion years ago, when I was 12 in Meadville PA, where zippers were invented back in the early 20th century, so our town didn't experience the Great Depression because the zipper factory still had a monopoly on the zipper and my dad worked there.
Deana the Queena
Love Aunt Dodie, Teaches you patience as she wonders around her brain. Brings back memories of my Aunt Josephine. She could whistle better that a canary could sing. She would read stories to me when I was little. Uncle Remus was my favorite. Thing is the readings always came out different each time she told them. Thanks Vicki for the memories.
Great comments and I like how many memories this snippet evoked. Before long I'll share some more. I am still getting the last three chapters onto the computer, editing as I go. Then I want to go back and fill in some major plot holes. Eventually I'll make it available in some form.
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